--|Beautiful Night

Subject: --|Beautiful Night Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:36 am

It's been a long day. Data has been walking in a straight line through this beautiful but deadly desert from the entire day. Being raised in the Si Wong Desert, he grew to memorize where each oasis would be located. "Not much further now." He whispered to himself with a cracky and raspy voice. He ran out of water about three hours ago, but seeing how it was night, the intense heat wouldn't be a problem, but the cold would be. His white leather trench-coat would be on over his body exposing his massive brown chest to the extreme cold. "Man, what I wouldn't give to be able to bend fire right now..." He thought to himself walking over a huge sand dune, the last one before approaching the oasis. Moving his body up and over the oasis was no challenge, but it did make him crave the refreshing taste of water even more. After a few minutes, Data finally reached the top of the dune, and down would be a massive oasis about fifty meters all around with earth surrounding the area for another one-hundred.

"Finally, ground!" Data yelled sliding down the dune. The cold sand running through his toes, it felt much better then the blazing hot sand. As he quickly reached the bottom, the oasis was now ten meters away. Taking his fist step on earth, He felt the vibrations give him the "second sight" he recently obtained. From what he could tell no one was within his range, so it would be only himself. Reaching the oasis, Data cupped his hands and dipped his hands in the cold water. "That fells amazing!" He yelled swiftly bringing his cupped hands up to his face for a long drink. The crystal clear water instantly made Data feel better. "Gotta love almost dying of thirst..." He said softly laughing as he felt up his wooden like water bottle that rested on his hip.

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Rika was resting in the oasis. She'd been travelling with her shirshu searching for something that was stolen from her. A small necklace was taken by a little boy when she was still in the earth kingdom. The boy had made off with it when his parents decided to travel the si wong to the other side of the desert. They were in a caravan so they were safe in groups. Rika was alone and had to be careful.

She undressed and got into the water. It was pretty cold. She sighed and began to heat up the water with her water bending skills. That would help her get used to the water. She waded into the pool and then ducked under. Water was such a wonderful and beauteous thing. She loved the feel of it on her body. She heard something funny when she was under. Like a man's voice. But the couldn't be it.

She shrugged and resurfaced. Only to find... a guy standing there drinking water. Her eyes widened and she gasped. She quickly moved back into the water to hide her unmentionables. "Who the hell are you?!" she screeched. How long was he there? Had he seen her? Was he a pervert?!

Subject: Re: --|Beautiful Night Mon Sep 26, 2011 1:57 am

The water bottle was filled within a few seconds. Taking the wooden flask out the nice cold oasis, Data clipped it back on his waist. Looking at his reflection within the clear water, Data's face was sandy and he looked like he was been through hell and back. "Damn, I look like shit." He said cupping his hands in the water. As the liquid poured in his hands, he turned his head away from the oasis and looked around his surroundings one last time. "Just me and the sand tonight huh?" He said slowly bringing the cupped hands to his face. The gulping of the water was loud and messing, but Data didn't care. Walking in the desert for a week does this to a person. Suddenly, he heard some type of scream. "Who the hell are you?!" This caught him off guard so much, the water in his mouth went down the wrong hole, and almost caused Data to choke. Jumping to his feet with water leaving his mouth, and shooting in many directions, he noticed the voice came from the center of the oasis. There, he saw a young girl with purple hair, she seemed to have her body under the water expect her head, and Data knew exactly why. Once his brain caught up with his natural reaction, he spun to face the other direction, leaving his back to the unknown girl. Still coughing, Data would tap his foot softly on the ground creating a wall of earth four meters long, and four meters high. After a moment of almost dying, Data was finally able to talk.

"O,Oh shit! M,My bad chick. I had no idea you were in there! I thought I was the only one around!" He yelled hoping the female would be able to hear him from behind this massive wall he had just created. "Even though this water is resting in a crater in the earth, my 'second-sight' couldn't feel her vibrations... I still have a lot to learn about seeing with my feet." Data said leaning his back up against the wall he had just created. Pointing his head up towards the sky, magnificent stars overtook the night sky making Data smile and chuckle slightly. "At least tonight is beautiful."

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Luckily the guy wasn't a pervert. He quickly turned around embarrassed. While he was turned Rika got out of the water and began to put clothing back on. She was sure to keep her eyes on him the entire time. That way she could water bend and kick his ass if he decided to do something really perverted.

She watched him raise some earth up and make a wall. So he was an earthbender huh? Well she'd met everyone then. People from all the nations, earth, air, and fire. She was lucky she guessed. Though this wasn't how she wanted to meet people.

"O,Oh shit! M,My bad chick. I had no idea you were in there! I thought I was the only one around!" Well he seemed sorry enough. Rika finished getting dressed and walked towards him. She heard him speak of the night and nodded her head.

"It is. You should be more careful next time or else-" A giant animal as big as a horse came racing towards the guy. It then flicked it's long tongue at him and if it hit him he would be paralyzed for a half an hour. Rika gasped.

Subject: Re: --|Beautiful Night Mon Sep 26, 2011 3:30 am

This was unexpected. For a girl to be out here in the remote desert, alone! That's almost unheard of around these parts, also, she happened to find the only Oasis within miles. "She can't have been traveling for long. She surely would have died. Mother Gaia is cruel to the stupid, and even worse to the confident." Data thought to himself putting his hands in his trench-coat pocket releasing a deep breath of relief. Things seemed to be calmed down on the other-side of the wall he had just created. "I wonder what shes doing?" Data asked himself tapping his right foot a few times softly on the ground. The vibrations being created traveled the land giving shape to the surrounding items in Data's head. But, once the vibration reached the oasis, it suddenly skipped over it and kept moving forward. "Yeah, I know for sure this time I can't see water." He muttered to himself as the vibration ended thirty meters all around Data with himself being right in the middle of the radius. It seemed this girl was still in the water, did she really plan on staying in there after the little misunderstanding? Data had no clue, but he was ready to leave if she did want to continue whatever it was she was doing.

As she got out, her movement sent vibrations within the earth that went to Data's feet. "I see her! She just got out!" The outline of her feminine body was clear to Data now as the image traveled to his head. Every step she took, another vibration was created letting Data know exactly where this female was and going. From what he could tell, she was putting on her clothes. He couldn't see the clothes of course, but her movements clearly indicated this. Once she was fully clothed, she began walking around the oasis and over to Data. Pushing himself off the wall, he stood tall and waited for her to pop around the corner of the massive wall that still stood. "Man, I hope shes not pissed! That was a total accident..." He thought to himself as his eyebrows flattened just about the thought of getting yelled at by a total stranger, a girl at that. But suddenly, a faint pulse entered Data's feet. He turned his head over to the left, the direction it was coming from. "Something fast is coming..." He muttered taking his hands out of his pockets standing looking straight ahead.

The girl would speak, but Data wouldn't catch it as he was focused on this fast approaching object. It's steps were much faster then any human, and its speed was amazing as well. "Things just got fun..." He said tapping his right foot on the ground. The moment his foot hit the ground, the earth pushed forward moving towards whatever it was that was coming in his direction. Suddenly, Data would see a large horse like creature appear from over the dune. It would spit out it's long like tongue in a whip motion, but its tongue would get no where near him for a massive column of earth would appear right underneath it, pushing the creature off into the distance. "I saw it coming a mile away!" Data muttered with a smirk on his face. He was getting better at this "second-sight" thing.

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"I saw it coming a mile away!" Rika growled at that. He didn't hurt Nuka but he could have. Nuka was only trying to protect her.

"You bastard! He was only trying to protect me!" she growled at the guy and pulled out her katana and began to run at him. What did he mean by when he said he saw him coming? He wasn't even looking at Nuka...

She had no time to think of that. She was watching for any movement from the guy as she ran at him. She wasn't going to kill him. Just scare him a bit. What he did was just cruel and mean to Nuka. She made a signal for Nuka to stay back. This was her fight and she would deal with this heartless peeping tom!

Subject: Re: --|Beautiful Night Tue Sep 27, 2011 3:58 am

The vibrations moving though the earth seemed to die down. The creature that was running towards him seemed to also be still. Data made sure he wouldn't hurt the animal, but just keep it away from him. But suddenly, the vibrations started up again, and it was coming from the direction of the girl. Data wouldn't even he looking at her, but within his head, he had the perfect view of the surrounding. "What is this I'm sensing? She's not moving, so what is giving off these weird vibrations?" He thought to himself as he shifted his eyes up to the open night sky once again. The vibrations followed a odd pattern Data knew all to well. "What is that?!" He asked himself once again feeling his blood boil at these odd continuous vibrations. By his blood rose, so his his heartbeat, which sent down a vibration of its own. Almost instantly after that he figured out what was causing the vibration. "Her heart!" He muttered as his heart rate dropped with his angry. "Her heart is beating...Really fast right now. As if shes angry at something?!" Then things started to click together all to well, the oasis, the creature. Data couldn't help but feel like this was Mother Gaia's way of paying him back from all the times he felt to confident about his desert skills.

"You bastard! He was only trying to protect me!" The girl shouted with angry pouring out her person. Data heard her loud and clear, but his prediction was 100% correct. Which mean't, he also had the ability to tell what a person is feeling based off the small changes within their body. "That creature must be her pet or even protector..." He said to himself as his eyes got lost within the beautiful glaze of the stars overhead. The Vibrations coming from the girl never stopped, they only got faster and more frequent. "Shes gonna be something stupid I know it." He whispered releasing a breath of exhaustion and frustration. He was tired from all his travels, and already annoyed at the situation at hand, but what could he do to get himself out of it? Her body vibrations told him everything, and it was obvious she wasn't in any state of mind to talk things out. As the girl unsheathed her blade, and took the very first step at Data, he was already in the middle of preforming a simple but effect counter.

As her fist step hit the earth, Data would tap his right foot on the ground once again creating yet another type of earthy stone wall in between himself and the girl. "If you're lookin' for a fight girly I'm not the person to pick." Data said as he kept looking up to the sky, his soul was lost within the sea of stars right above him. The vibrations was all he needed, if she made any move, he would know. Her every move was being watched with "sight beyond sight"

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Rika was in the middle of attacking when the guy put up a wall between them. She growled as her attack was stopped. "If you're lookin' for a fight girly I'm not the person to pick." Rika wanted to show him. He thought he was so tough. What a jerk! He just beat her pet up! What kind of person does that?

She began preparing a water bending move. She'd never used this one before but she was seriously angry. She used some water from her gourd to create multiple water whips. Once she had them she began to beat at the rock wall. She looked like an octapuss. She wasn't sure how this would help her but she was still going to use it.

"I'm not going to stop until you apologize to Nuka!" she shouted in anger. The woman bit her lip as she got more and more excited. Did she just master the multiple water whip her first time? Was it anger that fueled her and made her instincts help her to pull off techniques she had never used before?

Maybe she should try other techniques after. The rock was was very basic. It was a beginner techniques whereas the multiple water whips were more for skilled users. One thing remained that she had to know. How could he see what she was doing without looking at her? It was like he could see the future or something! That wasn't impossible wasn't it?

Subject: Re: --|Beautiful Night Tue Sep 27, 2011 10:50 pm

The wall stood right between Data in the girl. Blinking a few quick times, he came out of his hypnotized state and looked right at the wall behind him. "Shes really pissed!" Data thought to himself as the vibrations coming from her direction started getting faster with each passing second. If Data didn't do something quick, he was going to find himself in a battle he doesn't want to even be apart of. Still looking directly at the wall, he took his hands out of his pockets, and placed his right palm on the surface. Instantly, his "sight beyond sight" became even more clearer. The images in his head now appeared in a type of black-n-white appearance, instead of being vibration waves. "The image is clearer now! I can predict what she does before she even does it!" He muttered as her heart gave him way more information then his eyes. The image in his head showed she was doing something odd. Her movements were elegant "Is she Bending!?" Data asked himself. This girl couldn't have been a Earth Bender, her movements where must to elegant, for Earth Bending requires strong stiff movement. And besides, she was moving her arms, not her legs. Data could've easily stopped her at this very second, her vibration gave him the perfect outline of her body. Showing what body part was moving, and which one was about to move, this "second sight" was more amazing then Data thought.

Suddenly, Data ears picked up the sound of whipping. "What the hell?" He thought to himself as he took his hands off the wall and put them back into his white-trench coat pockets. The Vibrations coming from the earthy wall where intense, Data didn't need his feet to tell what was going on. "This is never gonna end..." He thought to himself as the walls seemed to be slowly crumbling. After each hit with whatever it was she was using, a chunk would collapse to the ground. "I'm not going to stop until you apologize to Nuka!" She yelled with a powerful angry voice. Once Data ears picked up these strange words he couldn't help but get angry. Jumping four feet off the ground, he would slam his legs on the ground with a loud "BANG!" Instantly, a square type box would appear all around the girl, trapping her like a wild animal. Whatever it was she was using to hit the wall he had created wouldn't be there anymore. The walls around the purple haired female would be four meters tall, leaving her helpless until he decided to let her out.

The wall he was leaning against would barely be standing now. "No need for this creation anymore." He said tapping his right foot on the ground. The Wall slowly descended back into the earth as if nothing had happened. Now that the attacks had stopped, Data could talk to this female without having to defend himself. "If you're mad about me attacking that monster... I'M SORRY! Is that what you wanted to here?! Because I can say it again girly! I'M. SO---RRY!" He said walking from side to side waiting for her to say something. Hopefully this would ease things... But deep down inside, he knew Mother Gaia had other things planed; she was a cold mistress.

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Rika gasped when the box went around her. She growled and kicked a wall. Though she hurt her foot and cursed. This stupid earth cage... She wished she could get out and just fight him. But that guy could see into the future or something. She knew she wouldn't win this fight but she would try if he didn't apologize.

"If you're mad about me attacking that monster... I'M SORRY! Is that what you wanted to here?! Because I can say it again girly! I'M. SO---RRY!" Rika growled at what he said. He'd finally said something but he didn't sound very sorry. Then again she never did say that he had to mean what he said. He at least had enough respect for her and Nuka to say sorry. Even if he didn't mean it.

"Fine. I'm calm now, you can let me out." She waited until he got rid of the earth. She still wanted to train though. She supposed she could have a calm conversation with him for a bit. Maybe long enough to ask if she could train some of her techniques.

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Subject: Re: --|Beautiful Night Wed Sep 28, 2011 1:33 am

Her Heart still seemed to beat fast, but she was finally starting to calm down even if she didn't know it. The earthy wall around her seemed to have the perfect effect, she wouldn't be able to do anything. "Is she done?" Data said, speaking to himself as he used the "sight beyond sight" to get a view no one else could obtain. The vibrations coming from his heart traveled around the area giving Data a type of sonar effect, but with vibration instead of sound. Suddenly, she would kick the wall. she was obviously frustrated about her current situation, but it wasn't his fault. "She better not blame me for this." He muttered to himself taking a few steps away from his earthy creation. If Mother Gaia really planed this encounter, there must be a greater meaning behind it? Was it fate? Or was it just pure accident? Data didn't know, nor did he really care. All he cared about right now was calming this raging girl down before he had to do something he really regretted. "I should just leave here her. The nearest town is only a few miles away. Someone will find her before day break." Data thought, setting her free could cause more hasty movement, and make him have to attack which is something he didn't want. "I'm between a rock I can't bend and a hard place.." He whispered shaking his head in frustration.

"Fine. I'm calm now, you can let me out." She yelled. A second wind came over Data, he was happy she said this, but could he trust this stranger? "She already attacked me once..." He instantly got that thought out of his head. Leaving her here would be heartless, and Mother Gaia was unforgivable to any non native of the desert. "Alright, I'll let you out." Data yelled taking five steps away from the box. Stomping his left foot on the ground, the walls quickly dropped back into the earth. Looking over at the girl with a confused face he would try to find some words to say, but nothing came to mind. He didn't want to angry her again, so he just stood straight up and smiled. "My smile gets me outta all trouble. She won't be able to resist my charm." Data thought to himself. He would let his muscular body, and good looks speak for him now, seeing how words wouldn't get through her thick-skull.

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"Alright, I'll let you out." Rika was set free after he made the rock go back into the ground. Rika walked towards the guy. He had dark skin. That was unusual because she didn't normally see others with that kind of skin tone other than water benders. He was well built and his muscles bulged every time he moved.

She was caught off guard when he smiled. He was handsome but she wasn't interested in guys that were cruel to her pets. She shook her head and walked towards him. "You're an earth bender... how did you see my attacks without even looking at me?" she asked him with full curiosity.

The desert night was a bit chilly and she had goose bumps on her arms. The girl still had wet hair and it would drip off of her into the sand at times. "Can you help me train? I still want to teach myself two techniques that I heard about. Please? You're really strong and you could help me."

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Subject: Re: --|Beautiful Night Fri Sep 30, 2011 1:03 am

Silence feel around the two for a moment. Data's charming smile seemed to be working. "So happy shes calm now. This could've ended badly." The Young Earth-Bender thought to himself placing one leg out in front feeling the vibrations moving through the earth. Suddenly, the unknown woman started asking questions. "You're an earth bender... how did you see my attacks without even looking at me?" This caught him off guard. She was angry one second ago, and now she wants to become all buddy buddy? Data would look at the girl with crocked eyes "She's a little odd, but I like that!" A small smirk formed itself on the left side of his face as he rubbed the back of his neck with his right hand. "You're pretty quick aren't cha' girly." Data spoke with a deep, powerful, and friendly voice. "But if I told you that, I'd have to kill ya'." The sarcasm in his speech was amazing, he would be amazed if this blue haired female didn't quickly pick it up. Looking back up at the endless sea of stars, The Young Earth-Bender spoke once more. "And besides, it's something you wouldn't understand. You're obviously not a Earth-Bender so it shouldn't matter." With that being said, Data kept tapping his right foot on the ground, sending out wave after wave of vibrations, giving him a full 360 degree view in his head.

And to make things weirder, the girl then asked Data to help her train. He would have instantly said no, but then she recognized his superior Earth-Bending skills quickly giving Data a change of heart. Looking back down at the blue haired girl, who stood about a foot and a half shorter then him, he started talking once again. "Usually I don't try to make friends with strangers that attack me in my territory, but I like you girly. I'll do whatever I can to help you train." Upon saying that, Data turned his extended leg out to the side, shifting the earth under the girl, which pulled her away about ten meters. "I don't know what type of Bending you use, so I need some distance. I hope you understand girly." Data said, putting his body into a powerful stance. His lower body was fully connected to the ground a full shoulder length apart, while his arms stayed to his side bending at the elbow. He would slowly close his eyes, feeling the endless amount of vibrations that came from her direction. Whatever she wanted to do, he was ready.

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"You're pretty quick aren't cha' girly." Rika puffed her chest out a bit in pride. What? Others didn't notice that normally? She felt kind of smart for that. That was until the guy had to open his mouth again. "But if I told you that, I'd have to kill ya'." Rika rolled her eyes at that last bit. He was obviously being sarcastic.

"And besides, it's something you wouldn't understand. You're obviously not a Earth-Bender so it shouldn't matter." Rika growled at that. He now thought her stupid? Which was it?! "Usually I don't try to make friends with strangers that attack me in my territory, but I like you girly. I'll do whatever I can to help you train."

Rika was then pushed away by the earth and they were now far apart. At least he would help her train. She just wanted to learn two techniques. So she would deal with him for now then be on her way when they were done.

Rika began to move her body and use the water from her gourd. She then dashed towards the guy and then as she did so she sent forth a blast of ice on the ground towards him. It was a bit slow but it went straight at him and would freeze him if he didn't dodge it.

Subject: Re: --|Beautiful Night Fri Sep 30, 2011 12:53 pm

Data watched extremely closely at this girls elegant movements. Her body looked lighter then a feather, while her arms waved from left to right. "Water-Bender?!" Data thought to himself shocked. This would be the first time he ever faced a Water-Bender, but he was willing to prove how strong he was any time of the day. Her movements may have been elegant and fast, but the vibrations coming from her moving body moved through the earth with great haste, giving The Young Earth-Bender near perfect "sight beyond sight". "I can't really predict what shes going to do...Not yet at least." He muttered shifting his body from left to right ready for the blue-haired woman to make the first move. The Art of the Earth-Bender is a powerful one; they learn how to adapt to any combat situation and hit with the force of a falling boulder. "Endure! Then strike with undying force!" He yelled in his head as he flexed his muscles with the burning passion of a genius within his big black eyes, but through the dark sunglasses, this would be almost impossible to see. Suddenly, the water the girl was bending, hit the earth and began moving towards Data, but was turning into Ice as it approached him.

"Your little puddles aren't gonna reach me girly!" Data yelled with a arrogant tone of voice as he slammed his left foot on the ground similar to a sumo wrestler. Suddenly, yet another giant wall of earth appeared right in front of Data, about five meters ahead, and four meters long and wide. The earthy creation seemed to be turn frosty as the ice traveled up it. "Icy." He muttered dropping one eyebrow as one rose. Jumping up, Data spun his body with his right leg extended. Once his strong body spun one full time, his foot would make perfect contact with the wall of earth, pushing it forward towards the girl with impressive speed. She could move out the way of this attack, for Data did nothing else afterwards. He didn't want to hurt this blue-haired Water Bender, he just wanted to help her train whatever it was she wanted to master. "Lets get this train rollin' girly!" Data yelled keeping his body in a strong stance.

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The boy was watching her closely. Her water bending moves made her hips and rear poke out as she moved. At times she would look like a belly dancer with her movements. That was because the southern water tribe's fighting style was based on hand and hip movements. Maybe he was a pervert. He was watching her movements so closely. This enraged the girl a bit and made her blush slightly. How dare he look at her body that way?! She wasn't some little thing to watch and enjoy! What did he think she was some exotic dancer?

"Your little puddles aren't gonna reach me girly!" He made a wall that made her ice useless. Rika was surprised at this. But her ice didn't last long. What did she expect?! This was a desert after all! Her ice wouldn't last very long anyway. Even if it was very chilly outside it was still very dry. Even in the oasis there wasn't much water in the air. Her lips were chapped and she was parched just from this excitement.

The wall was pushed towards her. She yelped but the water from the pool was still nearby. She used that water to create spikes in the air quickly. About a foot long and threw them into the earth. It was about four metes to the top. But, since the wall covered so much space Rika was able to do her water bending faster. Due to her spikes being small and quick to make. While his earthen wall was huge and took longer to form as well as it took longer to move.

Rike threw them at the earthen wall. Once they went all the way up it she ran towards the wall and began to climb up it. The ice was on the wall making Data unable to really sense anything that was on the wall. Since it formed a layer on top of it. He could probably sense her move towards the wall and sense her attacking the wall with her spikes but it would be hard for him to guess what she was doing. After all how many water benders do this?

She climbed the wall. Water benders were extremely adaptable. She was also quite the gymnast. She was used to climbing glaciers. This wall was small compared to them. She quickly climbed it and jumped into the air. She would use the ice on the glacier against him again, but this time she's turn the ice into ice disks in the air. Then she'd send three of them hurling towards him. As she dropped she'd have a few moments to make an ice slide with the water in her gourd. There she would slide quickly towards him while dropping.

He'd have to dodge or deal with the ice disks. As she slid on her feet her arms would be free. She would use more water from her gourd for spikes on her fingers. The ice projectile spikes would head straight for Data. She hoped that since he would have had to dodge the disks he wouldn't have time to see her small, projectile ice spikes head towards him.

Subject: Re: --|Beautiful Night Fri Oct 07, 2011 2:35 am

The vibrations coming from the girl never ceased, and Data's "sight beyond sight" stayed sharper then his eyes. With the base of his body powerful and strong, The Young Earth-Bender slowly closed his eyes and put all his faith into his newly obtained technique. "Sight beyond sight; let my mother guide you!" He whispered to himself as he saw past the earthy wall. The blue haired girls movements were quick and perfect, and the area surrounding them stayed silent as if Gaia herself knew Data was serious about this little spar. Suddenly, his ears twitched as he heard the faint sound of picking, he didn't open his eyes at all. The picking came from the other side of the wall, and getting through four meters of strong earth would be almost impossible. But this sound instantly caused his blood to pump, and his passion for a good fight to erupt like a dormant volcano. Her vibrations kept reaching Data's feet as a smirk grew across his face. "Whatever you do it's not gonn---!" Suddenly, his words were quickly cut short for her wild and crazy vibration pattern came to a stop. Data swiftly opened one eye and looked dead ahead at the wall, he listened for a split second and heard no splash, so he knew she wasn't in the water. "Somehow she's on the wall! So why can't I see her?!" He asked himself getting ready to attack. Slamming his foot one hard time, four stones about one meter in size would pop out from the ground. "Here it comes girly!" He shouted kicking one rock at a time with simple kicking motions up above the wall be had created. The three rocks would be three feet apart covering the entire upper part of the wall. While the last rock, would be sent flying straight forward with the speed of a arrow. "BOOM!" The fourth rock pierced right through the massive wall causing it to crumble on impact. So, if she decide to stay on the wall, she would simply be buried under a 20Ibs of rock causing somewhat of a little damage. But if she came over the top, she would most likely be hit with a great stone causing her to fly back a few meters. Either way, Data was ready for the outcome of his attack to be successful or a failure.

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"Whatever you do it's not gonn---!" Rika smirked as she jumped over the edge of the huge rock edge. She was happy that she caught him off guard. But then, her smirk turned into a face of surprise. A huge rock was headed her way and it would hurt. She couldn't break it with her water or use her water quick enough to get out of the way. She was hit full force with the rock and she went over the wall luckily the rock wasn't made of anything too hard. The oasis wasn't made of hard rock sediment. So the rock broke apart into small pieces in the air after it hit teh girl. She wouldn't be smashed under it.

She made an ice slide that went all the way to the water. She then splashed into the water and came up after spluttering. She gasped for air and made it to the edge of the pool. Her ice melted away and she relaxed a bit. She was beaten and she had learned all of her techniques. She was done for the night.

Rika got out of the water and began wringing her shirt out a bit. Nuka came forward and sniffed her. She had some big bruises but wasn't seriously injured. "Okay Data, you win. I learned the techniques I wanted. A real battle scenario really helped. Thank you. I'm going to go. I think you redeemed yourself enough but if we meet again you better be nicer to my Shirshu. One thing I can't stand is animal cruelty."

The woman hopped onto the Shirshu after she got enough water. She then began riding away on it. There would be a town near enough. She'd get to it around midday and by then she would probably be out of water. Nuka had gotten enough water as well. Good thing he could hold his water well. She glanced one more time at Data and nodded before riding off.

(End Topic. Sorry I just needed to get this done. I wanted to be able to use my new techs. lol)

Subject: Re: --|Beautiful Night Mon Oct 10, 2011 1:18 am

Before he could even blink, one of the three rocks made perfect contact with the stomach of the blue haired girl pushing her back on the side where she appeared from. Luck for her, the soft earth hit her with enough force to knock her body away from the crumbling hard earthen wall. "That was fun..." The Young Earth-Bender said to himself with a raspy tone of voice breaking his natural Earth-Bending stance. Suddenly, a slight force started pulling his body down. Looking down at his waist, and touching his traveling bag which rested upon his shoulders. Data quickly noticed he didn't even take off his heavy traveling gear. "If this was a real fight, things would've got ugly quick!" He said chuckling slightly as he moved his hands from item to time brushing his hand gently against his waist. Looking back up at the crumbling rock wall, Data couldn't feel nothing but sorrow for the girl, she took a pretty fast slab of earth to the stomach. Even though The Young Earth-Bender held back, he still couldn't help but think he was treating this little sparring match as a life or death fight. "I need to stop that..." Data thought to himself looking over at the girl who slowly started standing up. A type of second-wind came over his powerful black body, he was happy to see the blue haired girl was standing and OK. Bringing his body to a slow walking motion, Data took a deep breath and began talking. "Yo, Sorry about tha---." His words were instantly cut short from her next actions.

As she got out the oasis, she started wringing out her shirt. Data didn't understand why she was doing this. "I don't know much about Water-Bending but. Shouldn't she be able to just Bend the water out of her clothes?!" He thought to himself with a confused look. Of course he didn't speak these words out loud, he didn't need to bring anymore trouble to the table. The blue haired female would look at Data and start talking. "Okay Data, you win. I learned the techniques I wanted. A real battle scenario really helped. Thank you. I'm going to go. I think you redeemed yourself enough but if we meet again you better be nicer to my Shirshu. One thing I can't stand is animal cruelty." Wait?! How did she know Data's name?! He must have spoke it sometime before the fighting had even begone? Either way, it didn't matter to him. The girl seemed friendly enough, a little reckless with her life, but still friendly none the same. "Yeah, sure..." The Young Earth-Bender sighed rubbing the back of his head for he felt like he was the innocent one in this entire situation. "If the thing didn't come off so hostile, I wouldn't have attacked!" He yelled deep within his head biting his tongue to make sure he spoke no fighting words. Before he knew it, the girl mounted her Shirshu and disappeared within the desert leaving Data alone.

"Figures! They get what they want from me, and then leave." He spoke laughing and shaking his head at what just happened. Shifting his vision back over to the dune, and back up at the moon he knew exactly which route to take. The vibrations from the girl and her "pet" seemed to be completely gone now. His Journey would continue like nothing had happened. "I sure meet a lot of weird people. HAHA!" Data muttered walking over a Sand-dune, and sliding down the opposite side, causing himself to also disappear into this endless desert known as the Si Wong. Mother Gaia seemed to have other plans with Data.

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